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Thursday, 13 August 2015

Grass to Glass part 1

Walt: Add detail to the end of sentences.
Cows eat 70 kilograms of grass a day,to make milk for us to drink.They just eat grass  all day.  When it’s winter the farmer cates the grass to make silage.

Cows have four stomachs, to help  them  digest the grass. Compared to us who have only one  stomach.They brutp the grass back up  and  crew  it  again.


Milking happens twice a day, early in the morning and late afternoon.In the herrmgbone milking shed.One cow can make 30 lites of milk.

Now days milking machines do all the hard work,but in the olden days they have to use their hands. It  was so broing to do.

Image from riose world

1 comment:

  1. Thanks for sharing what you know about the milking process Jonathan. I can see you have tried to add another clause to the end of your first paragraph sentences.
    There is a sentence you have written in paragraph 2 that doesn't seem to make sense, you might want to check it.

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